Nadine Gordimer's "Burger's Daughter": Narrative Technique
The narrative of Nadine
Gordimer’s novel Burger’s Daughter is in two
modes of narration; one is a third person
narration by the omniscient author, and the other is by Rosa herself. The latter, Rosa's own narration, is
very much in the stream-of-consciousness technique.
The double discourse of the private disruptive voice
and the public conventional tone informs the narrative structure of the novel.
The narration alternates between first person and third person- "My
version and theirs".
The narration by the
omniscient author is like a detached record of the happenings in Rosa Burger's life.
The opening is a perfect example of this third person narrative: “Among the
group of people waiting at the fortress was a schoolgirl in a brown and yellow
uniform holding a green eiderdown quilt and, by the loop at its neck, a red
hot-water bottle.” But at times, even this detached omniscient authoress
penetrates into the labyrinths of Rosa Burger's mind to explore the deep embedded
complexities of her consciousness.
The two narratives, the subjective and the objective viewpoints,
complement each other. Jan Mohamed explains that while the objective third-person narrative is factual and
neutral, the subjective first-person narrative- Rosa's voice- is
intense and personal. Rosa's monologues are directed towards
Conrad, her lover in the first part of the story, to her father's former wife,
Katya while Rosa is in France, and to her father, Lionel Burger after she
returns to South Africa. In each case, the third
person narrator intercepts with Rosa's first-person address and as a result
Rosa's voice is never public. Her impulse to withdraw from an audience is strong
at the beginning, she writes to her imagined addressee, "If you knew I
was talking to you I wouldn't be able to talk". Because her imagined
audience is always sympathetic and never questions her, Rosa's confessions are
honest and open.
Gordimer explores the
deep turbulence hidden beneath Rosa's serene composed smile- a gesture which
Rosa has been conditioned to live with through her life. This disturbed psyche
of the ostensibly composed Rosa can be determined in two ways - by gauging her responses
and studying her perceptions, and through her monologue with Conrad, a stranger
who became close to her during her father's trial, whom she started relating to
as her brother.
This monologue, even
though it is in the stream-of-consciousness technique, is not like that of
Mehring (the protagonist of Gordimer’s another novel, The Conservationist).
It is instead in the form of replies to Conrad's queries and allegations, for
instance: “Listen to me—Conrad, whatever I may have said to you about them,
however they may have seemed to me since I have been free of them, they are the
ones who matter.”
Rosa spends most of the
time addressing herself to the questions Conrad had raised in her regarding her
beliefs and feelings. Rosa conceives her relationship with Conrad in terms of
her upbringing and views him as a sibling "treating each others’ dirt
as our own, as little Baasie and I'd long ago''. She stops making love to
Conrad, and realizing the fact that her relationship with Conrad is turning
into an incest she leaves the garden cottage of Conrad.
It is Conrad who dares
to question the tenants and the values of Rosa's life and their authenticity.
Conrad's queries are also like a questioning of Rosa's own consciousness. The
monologue, a sub-consciousness conversation with Conrad is therefore a dialogue
with her inner self. This part of the narrative is tainted by a slight touch of
bitterness. Rosa throughout the narrative refers to her father as “Lionel”
in the manner of a detached stranger.
Gordimer uses quotation
dashes to punctuate her dialogue in Burger's Daughter instead
of traditional quotation marks. She told an interviewer in 1980 that
readers have complained that this sometimes makes it difficult to identify the
speaker, but she added "I don't care. I simply cannot stand he-said/she-said
anymore. And if I can't make readers know who’s speaking from
the tone of voice, the turns of phrase, well, then I've failed."
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